Monday, September 29, 2008

Youtube.com Thesis Statement

Youtube is such an anonymous exposure secrets website .

3 comments:

Miguel Tepale said...

Instead if using "such", why not youtube is "a" anonymous...and you know the rest.
Just a suggestion.

myoussef100 said...

Thank you miguel .I am going to take your suggestion on my consideration.

Stefania Silva said...

Your thesis statement seems to be more of fact rather than an actually arguement. You should include a belief or arugement that you can prove :)